As part of our assignment this week (technically rolled over from last week because it was forgotten), I commented on two of my lovely classmates’ case studies on their respective blogs. For your convenience, I have posted my comments below, as well as links to their blogs.
First, I applaud you for tackling a Foucauldian analysis, which is never a simple task. I found your case study very clear and well supported and I appreciate how you separated the study into levels of nodes. Your visualization also clear and concise and married well with your case study. Excellent read!
I love how creative your OoS is! Your case study is very thorough and you offer two clear, helpful visualizations. The only thing missing is perhaps more support from Popham and Miller, who are mentioned but not clearly outlined for support. Overall excellent work!